holyforks's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[UMK3 New Fatalities]

pretty good

alot of those were actually really good but the fact that you had to sit through the closing transition got old really fast

MaldivirDragonwitch responds:

Thanks for the idea, I'll put a 'Back to the Menu' on each scene, although it will look awful...

[Pirate Door]

great

ive always loved kinetic typography and loved how you did it

but the way they all moved to their destination sometimes made it hard to read
making them move faster or moving the camera less would help

MostlyAwesome responds:

Thank you, kind sir.

I tried to have some variety in there on camera movements, testing out different options for next time. Glad to know a lot of movement isn't good.

[NG, learn how to vote!]

HEY! brother!

nice seeing your work again, loved it!
little advice, make sure the music is not overshadowing the voice
it would make it clearer to understand
looking forward to some other piece of work by you

HolyKonni responds:

Thanks brother!

[Bedtime Story]

great

loved the story
the art was simple but detailed and fitted really well with everything else

[Will Never Be Forgotten]

tought challenging?

seeing as you are the same guy that made '' the red ball '' id say : try to be more imaginative it feels somewhat like a continuation of '' the red ball '' instead of a second movie.

but on its own it has its praise

[Grapes of Wrath]

only 1/2 good

terrific voice acting, and I mean truly well executed
but the animation lacks a bit. I know this is for an english class
and that the animation isn't that important but just a little more work could have made the difference