holyforks's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cheesecake?]

basic

its was pretty basic for kinetic typography. This was a good starting point to improve by doing something else with the letters, more movement, be creative!

Funky-Chickin responds:

I saw what you meant. very cool!
I know for next time eh! thx a bunch!

[Fishcat]

good but..

The text was in the background and sometimes it made the sentence unreadable.
but other than that it was good.I look forward to your progress!

[E4 Sting - Miming Jackson]

good

Really good. Personally I think its great but do you think your style
is really... marketable?

z00mpa responds:

Ummm... Probrably not for all audiences! I do plan on making some more appealing animations eventually...

[really random madness war]

lag

The fps was way too low it really killed everything else.
For the next one try to make it a little more fluid.

huw2k8 responds:

ok i will keep that in mind

[cactuar and the party]

bad

the animation was abysmal and the fact it was pretty long made it even more apparent that nothing was going on. The audio sounded like it was in a box. would have voted higher if the subtitles were not full of errors. And putting yourself in an animation and having everyone say your great just makes you look bad

diogoshx responds:

interesting, first the name had meaning, was cactuar hum and the party that once meant what it was, not quite so great so come until 2673 frames ... constintuindo by scenes if you want choices ahead xd.
the sound was the microphone, I'm not English, the subtitles were made in the port translator-eng ...
misspelled captions is funniest

I say good on me? it was a joke [] []

for all the people of newgrounds:
my flash in the reviews is 1 means that on 1 vote almost always starts in score was still 10 ... so I am saying

[CatFat Episode 2]

is he a suppository?

sexual innuendo's aside that was masterfully executed. my only problem was the voice acting, some parts seemed like they should have been louder or at least have a difference between when they are screaming and when they are not because it just seems like they are over-acting

CatFat responds:

thanks for the review!
yeah about the voices, i was affraid to actually shout into the mic when i was recording, because my neighbors a mad man and we have seriously hollow walls, so it would be embarrassing shouting the same line ten times for all to hear :P
i'll try to overcome it though, if i ever make another flash

[Oh Boy, Five Dollars]

nice

the graphics were so-so but it was totally saved by the audio and the storyline.
the 5 dollars turns into a 10 when the skeleton grabs it. Is that intentional?

TheSentinel responds:

Yeah, that was intentional. I was originally going to end it there as a cheesy set up for a sequel called "Oh Boy, Ten Dollars!", but instead, I decided just to keep it going until the song was finished.

[Crossover Mision Ep 1]

pretty good

the subtitles were really a pain to read but it was nice to see a sprite movie that was about lesser known characters.