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[Endless Stars]

ANIMATION

keep that stuff on youtube

RunnerGuitar responds:

Would but had a bad experience with Youtube altough your opinion on the song (not flash/video) THE SONG would be aprecited

[Cyberen in: The Finale]

ironic

first line in description is : Here it is again with a fully-functional preloader

too bad it doesn't work

cyberen responds:

Now it's working!

[Madness Combat BL Trailer]

slideshow

Now I know english isn't your first language but ''blod'' ?
Are you sure you don't mean "blood"?
Animation-wise there was absolutely nothing. Just a collection of sprites
ripped directly off madness. Im not saying thats bad but since there is
no animation we can't really tell if its good or not.

MADNESS91 responds:

aver and you are saying or cres you dick for the very people said that this is a bad animation cres if you have a dick as you and it took me long.

see also I put blod gear because not everything has to be like you win the fucking idiot and is not a spelling mistake so go wing spar

[English ad]

good

so yeah its school project material so I wont say anything about quality but
you didn't give the right dimensions.
There is a huge gray bar on the side during the movie and
on top and bottom of your first frame.

BADFX responds:

Yeah i know that, because my preloader is a different stage size to the movie and i cbf changein it

[Dad buys Christmas gifts]

great!

Some small (and I mean small) problems, one of the button for the robot wasn't colored all the time but thats just nit-picking. Joke was good, art was great, couldn't ask for more.

HolyKonni responds:

thanks man!

[SAMQDS 2 (stickfight)]

too much going on

A clear case of quantity over quality, there is so much going on at any given time that
it makes everything hard to follow. the same plot with maybe less characters or a more stretched out story would help a lot.

Sandremss128 responds:

Thats true, you look beyond the confusing action and into the quality and realised that it was bad, some other people see this and think its nice because theres allot going on, which I put some time on. Thanks for your review.

[LONY trailer]

iffy

Im hoping you improve when it will be out or that your writing will be able to hold it all together. I cant really say for now since there wasn't much.

Jinx-Studios responds:

This was just a small thing I did. The series' animation will be much more fluid and pretty.

[RAF TAS episode 1]

som"E"what

A few spelling errors here and there but still a really good series.
My only problem with it is that its almost like a long commercial for RAF.
When he started to explain the forum rules I kinda got that vibe.
I hope to see more of this series anyway though.

Aquarious2008 responds:

yeah you arent the only one who told me they had that type of vibe lol don't worry, the whole series isn't like that. This episode was just an introduction

[Lip Sync - Practice]

nice first try

its needs mores types of mouths and maybe bump the framerate a little higher to do something more fluid.It looked pretty random from my point of view, couldn't see the difference between the words.

TheStonehill responds:

thanks for the tips problem was that the program i edited the sound in was Toon boom which is why i only have a certain amount of mouth movements i was working to s tight deadline, or lese i would have done a lot more work on that front,
Thanks again

[SE Demo Reel 09-10]

was it placed in chronological order?

It was pretty good but doesn't a yearly demo reel mean your gonna stop animating for the rest of the year?

someplaceelse responds:

Thanks!

No, it wasn't placed in chronological... in fact, a clip from my first submission was placed at the very end almost. ^_^

and yes, excluding may be a little christmas animation, I will probably be inactive for the rest of the year.