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ever heard of irony?

Let me just quote you to prove a point : '' we don't need our stuff being bogged down by some dumbass kid who thinks he's cool because he sped up his voice. ''
Now im not saying that is my point of view but im pretty sure even you can see the problem with you criticizing people for making stuff like that.

[SAMQDS 2 (stickfight)]

too much going on

A clear case of quantity over quality, there is so much going on at any given time that
it makes everything hard to follow. the same plot with maybe less characters or a more stretched out story would help a lot.

Sandremss128 responds:

Thats true, you look beyond the confusing action and into the quality and realised that it was bad, some other people see this and think its nice because theres allot going on, which I put some time on. Thanks for your review.

[LONY trailer]

iffy

Im hoping you improve when it will be out or that your writing will be able to hold it all together. I cant really say for now since there wasn't much.

Jinx-Studios responds:

This was just a small thing I did. The series' animation will be much more fluid and pretty.

[ChinEp.2]

nice base

you have the basics down for sure. you should probably try working on something different or if you feel like it you should make an animation.

[RAF TAS episode 1]

som"E"what

A few spelling errors here and there but still a really good series.
My only problem with it is that its almost like a long commercial for RAF.
When he started to explain the forum rules I kinda got that vibe.
I hope to see more of this series anyway though.

Aquarious2008 responds:

yeah you arent the only one who told me they had that type of vibe lol don't worry, the whole series isn't like that. This episode was just an introduction

[SonicVShadow Epic Battle]

one word

"sound" way too much of it, all the time. It was really busy in the sound and really put me off. The Idea is pretty common but its made well enough to be able to pull it off.
If its a WIP just wait until its finished.

[Lip Sync - Practice]

nice first try

its needs mores types of mouths and maybe bump the framerate a little higher to do something more fluid.It looked pretty random from my point of view, couldn't see the difference between the words.

TheStonehill responds:

thanks for the tips problem was that the program i edited the sound in was Toon boom which is why i only have a certain amount of mouth movements i was working to s tight deadline, or lese i would have done a lot more work on that front,
Thanks again

[SE Demo Reel 09-10]

was it placed in chronological order?

It was pretty good but doesn't a yearly demo reel mean your gonna stop animating for the rest of the year?

someplaceelse responds:

Thanks!

No, it wasn't placed in chronological... in fact, a clip from my first submission was placed at the very end almost. ^_^

and yes, excluding may be a little christmas animation, I will probably be inactive for the rest of the year.

[New Moon in 24 seconds]

try something different

wasn't that good there was no intensity, it was explained by someone who sounded bored. The art was also pretty sub-par. The joke(s) weren't that good.
(and before you ask, I saw it)

Joey-Kazaam responds:

I see your one step ahead of me. I would switch, but I have banked nearly 1.6k off of 5 minutes of work, your advice has been noted and my next venture in this field will be as intense as you want it to be.

[989 bytes]

cool

I always loved fractals
but is it a program you made that does that or did you made a movie out of it?